It's getting there...
I agree with the other reviews that the song could benefit from some type of harmonic progression. You might try to use two different guitar parts, one lower rhythm sound to establish the chord and another higher lead sound to play the melody, kind of like you did in your other song < / Indie >.
For an example of this in action I would look up "The Star Spangled Banner" by Iced Earth on youtube.
Ok, I'll try to look up the video as soon as possible.
Great song
The instrumentation is right on and the harmonic progression gives the piece some variety. I liked how the song doesn't go on forever as many trance songs do.
The only thing that I can say might improve the song would be to reduce the volume on the lead sound just a tad, as it seems to slightly overpower the rest of the mix, especially the drums. A great song overall, though.
Thanks PGegen.
I agree with you that the lead overpowers the drums and everything. I should probadly had turned the volume down on the lead a bit. Anyway thanks for your opinion.
-CyberPot-
Great Rob D style song
I think the vocals really complement "The Robot" and add a new layer of complexity. The arrangement progresses throughout the piece and never stagnates or becomes boring.
As far as the arrangement goes, I think the piece would benefit from some pad-style sounds for further define the harmonic progression. The counterpoint style is perhaps a bit too subtle for this song.
Overall, though great job on the piece.
Great song
This piece reminds me of some of Al di Meola's songs, with a bit less jazz, a bit more rock, and some Satch-style shredding in for good measure.
Great song, 5/5.
is he an arab =p jk
Great job
The drums are just slightly too soft, but otherwise there's nothing really worth complaining about. I really enjoyed listening!
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